Full Line by Line Editing
WHILE WORKING ON YOUR MANUSCRIPT I’LL BE LOOKING AT THE FOLLOWING:
∙ Every word checked carefully for clarity and flow
∙ Spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation and capitalization checks
∙ Removal of redundant words that slow the story
∙ Consistency in tenses
∙ Replacement of awkward passages
∙ Proper spacing for words, lines and paragraphs
∙ Effectiveness of sentence structure and word choice
∙ Seamless transitions
∙ Enough detail
∙ Characters
∙ Anything that can improve your story while maintaining your style and tone
FOR FICTION MANUSCRIPTS, YOU WILL ALSO RECEIVE:
An editorial report containing:∙ Extensive details on my observations while editing your book
∙ Areas I noticed worked well
∙ Things that could be improved on
∙ Thoughts about plot, pacing and flow
∙ In depth explanation about changes I made while editing
∙ Anything additional I think might be beneficial to you, as an author
E. Segal
WritingI needed a condensed rewrite of some text for an ebook product page and Sarah delivered an excellent rewrite the same day that captured the impact of the longer, original text with about half as many words. Would definitely hire her again for future writing projects!